2nd, 3rd, and 4th Grades - Jefferson Elementary School

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You are My Hero
edited excerpts from
Jefferson student writings
2nd Grade
Edited Writing
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My teacher is my hero because she helps us.
My mom is my hero because she helps me feel
better and helps me learn.
My sister is my hero because she is funny and
helpful.
My dog is my hero because she saved me one
time.
My aunt is my hero because when I cry, she
kisses me on the head and helps me.
My hero is my cat because she helps me.
My dog Gus is my hero because she helps
clean my room.
Dave is a hero because he lets me ride his
truck.
God is my hero because he gives me a home
with grass, and some trees. Next he gives me
good and yummy food.
God is my hero because he gives me me fresh
water and awesome food, dogs and cats and
other pets.
Batman and army and mom and dad and God
and sister and brother.
My hero is Jesus and God because he made
us.
My hero is lots of people but I don’t know which
one. I think it is my friends. I just don’t know. I
think it is my dad. Yeah, I think it is my dad.
Maybe it is my mom.
My cat Sam is my hero because she chases
mice.
My moms and dad is a hero.
My aunt is my hero for many reasons. She
helps me.
My hero is Spiderman.
My hero is me. I help people.
My hero is Olaf and Elsa and Anna.
My mom is my hero for many reasons. My mom
cooks for me.
My dad is my hero for many reasons. First, he
plays with me.
My mom is my hero because she is nice to me.
My dad is my hero for many reasons. First, he
plays with me. We play football together.
My mom is my hero for many reasons.
My grandma is my hero because she cares
about me.
My mom is my hero because she does stuff.
PTO is my hero and a hero for my school.
My family is my hero. First, my mom is my hero
because she saved me and drives me to
school. Next, my dad is my hero. He cares
about me and loves me.
My family is my hero because they’re always
there for me.
My mom is my hero because she is awesome.
My mom and dad are my hero because they
have done lots of things for me.
My heros are cops for two reasons. First, they
keep us safe and arrest bad guys. Next, they
are nice.
The Air Force is my hero.They can go 100
miles per hour. They have guns under their
wings.
My mom is my hero for two reasons. First,
when I get hurt she helps me like when I fell off
my scooter and when I fell off my bike.
My dog is my hero.
My hero is cops, fire fighters, ambulances and
God.
My dad is a hero for many reasons.
I think my mom is my hero for many reasons.
My dog is my hero for many reasons.
My friends are my heros for many reasons.
My dad is my hero.
There are two people that are my heros. First,
my great great great grandpa who was in the
army in World War 2 and my dad who gets
money.
My mom is my hero for many reasons. She is
nice and beautiful.
My mom is a hero because she gets me out of
my bed if there is a spider.
My dad and mom are my heros.
My dad is my hero. He helps me. He is tall.
My dad is a hero.
My hero is my godfather.
My favorite hero is a cop.
There are two heros in my family, my grandpa
and my mom.
My favorite hero is my dad.
My dad is my hero because when I am
bleeding he helps.
My aunt is my hero. She tells our neighbors to
stop fighting so I can sleep.
My grandpa is my hero because he killed a
huge spider.
My dad is my hero because he washes my
blood.
My dad is my hero because he helps me, he
loves me, he takes care of me, he brings me to
school.
My mom is my hero.
My mom is my hero for many reasons. She
feeds my family. She feeds me. She puts me to
bed. She puts my brothers and my sister to
bed. Thank you for all you do, mom.
My mom is my hero for a lot of things. When I
fell, she caught me and got a bandaid. She
gave me medicine and she put me on the
couch.
Batman is my hero because he is cool and has
weapons.
My hero is a firefighter.
Third Grade
Edited Hero Excerpts
My dad is a hero because he was in the army
and has saved my people.
Clearwater Marine Aquarium is my hero
because they save animals so they can stay
alive.
My dad is my hero because he saved me from
a bee, and he loves me.
My mom is my hero because she gave me
food.
The first horse I ever rode named Blue is my
hero. Once I got hurt and started to bleed while
he was eating, and he stopped for me and
helped me. He put his head down, and I
grabbed on.
A lot of people in my life are my heroes, like my
family, like my dad who’s a P.A. and my mom
who takes care of me and my brother well
that’s a big deal.
My hero is my uncle Johnny who went to the
army and came home just like when he left.
My cousin is my hero. First, he is in the Air
Force. He comes and helps at our grandma’s
house.
My mom is my hero. She is a nurse and takes
care of people that were in the army and the
navy.
My heroes are my mom and stepdad.
My mom is my hero because she does all she
can.
My dog is my hero.
My heros are my uncle, my mom, my brother,
and a doctor.
My mom is my hero for many reasons. First, I
was choking on a chip. Then, my mom gets me
ater. I drink it and stop choking.
My dog is a hero for many reasons. First, my
dog barks if someone bad is in the house and if
someone is at the door.Next, my dog cheers
me up if I am sad or hurt.
My mom and dad are my heroes for many
reasons. First, they cook for me so I would not
starve. Thank you for cooking for me. Second,
tey take care of me. If they would not take care
of me, I would not have anybody to live with
me. Thank you for taking care of me. Next, they
love me forever. I am glad they love me so
much. If they wouldn’t, I would not have
anybody to love me.
My hero is my mom. First of all, my mom s my
hero because she takes care of me and my
family and my grandpa and my grandma. Next,
she cleans my bed covers and my pillowcase.
My mom is my hero for many reasons. First, my
mom saved Lexy and Kristina and my dog’s
lives.
My hero is my family for many reasons. First of
all, my family is nice. Next, my family is my
hero because they care about me.
My dad and grampa are heroes in many ways.
First, my dad is in the army.
All in my family are heroes. First, we do save
other families.
My family is my hero for many reasons. First of
all, my family loves me. My family takes care of
me more than anyone. Next, my family buys us
food. They take me to school. When I get back
from school, they give me food to eat. When it
is night, my family always read me a book. But I
never get to say thank you. But every day, I
always tell them I love them.
4th grade
Edited Writing Excerpts
My hero is my great-grampa who was in the
war.
My hero is my dad.
My hero is God.
My hero is God. Do you have a hero and why?
My hero is my great grandpa. He served in
World War II.
My hero is all the soldiers who gave us our
freedom.
I have a hero and that is my mom because of a
lot of reasons.
My daddy is my hero because he provides our
family food, a house, water and for saving and
protecting this world’s freedom.
Do you have a hero? I do, and I will tell you
who. My dog is my hero for saving me when I
went in the woods at my house.
My hero is so honest and helpful. He takes
people to jail if they have to. They take care of
us if we break an arm.
How many heroes do you have? Is it an
animal? I will tell you my hero - Kobe.
Mom is my hero. She cares for me. She is kind,
helpful and more.
Today I would like to tell you who and why she
is my hero. My hero is my sister Jas. To begin,
she cooks the food. I don’t know how to cook.
How you ever had a hero that is always with
you. Well, I had a hero is always with me and
takes care of me when I’m a little girl. My hero
is my mom. My mom is my hero because she is
always there for me.
My hero is my Uncle Ben. He served in the Air
Force.
Do you have a hero that is a weird person for a
hero? I do, and that person is my dad. He is my
hero because first off, he loves me for who I
am. My dad doesn’t try to change me.
My mom is my hero. My mom does lots of
things for me. She is amazing. She loves me
even when I’m bad. She tucks me into bed.
She is a great mom, and I love her with all my
heart.
My dad is my hero. He has taught me many
things in life.
Have you ever had someone special to you?
My grand is nice to me. She cooks. She buys
clothes. She is the best. She always does her
best. She is the bomb. She celebrates my
birthday. She is kind. She buys me toys. As you
can see, she is my hero.
Who is your hero? My heroes are my parents. I
have many reasons why they are my heroes.
The first reason is that they buy me things I
need.
My hero is my mom. My mom helps me when I
get hurt. The second detail is that my mom
helps me do my homework. Last is that my
mom is nice to me.
My dad is my hero.
I’m going to tell you about my hero. My hero
works in the dirt and sun and cold. He is my
dad. My dad works all day to give us food and
money. He is always willing to help or do
anything. My dad is the best. I couldn’t ask for
another one.
My uncle is my hero because he was in the
Army. He was in the World War 1 and 2.
My heroes are my mom and dad. Both take
care of me and also they buy my food and
clothes.
Brook Berringer (1973-1995) was a Nebraska
quarterback. He is my hero because he never
gave up. He played with a collapsed lung. That
shows courage and never giving up. He gave
back to others. He spent many times with kids
and people in the hospital.
Many reasons I love my dog, Sophie. She
makes me exercise. She always jumps on me.
She will protect our family.
My mom is my hero because she makes me
food and my dad because he is very helpful.
Do you have a hero in your life? I do. My
heroes are the nurses in Columbus Nursing
Home for taking care of my great-grandma,
even though she died. The reason why you are
my heroes is because you took great care of
her, even though she was very sick. You
helped her through the pain and fed her great
meals.
My dad is my hero for many reasons. He cooks
most of the food. He helps with homework and
brings us to school.
My mom is my hero.
My mom is my hero for many reasons. My
mom gives me a lot of stuff I need.
My hero is my Grandpa Schaefer. He was the
best grandpa I ever had. He took me to the
park when I was little. My grandpa worked for
the Navy.
My hero is my dog Louie.
These are my heroes who saved and protected
my favorite people. The vet saved my dog
Xeda after she got her leg ran over. Another
hero is my Uncle Scott was in the army and is
now retired from the army. The hospital saved
my dad from heart disease. What I say to those
people is thank you for all you did to save and
to protect those people. Thank you!
My heroes - my mom and dad. I now will tell
you about someone who will always love you
and who knows that kids make mistakes.
My mom and dad are my heroes for many
reasons.
I’m grateful for Ivy, my dog. She plays with me
and helps me. I’m grateful for mom. She feeds
me and makes my bed. She helps with
homework. I’m grate for dad. He is a soccer
coach and plays with me.
My hero is my dog, Daisy who we got at the
farm.
My dog Louie is my hero who we got when he
was puppy.

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